You always take things out on me
I have feelings and I hurt, can't you even see
stop asking me why I have an attitude
stop telling me that I'm being rude.

finally! someone understands that! gosh, my mom tells me that all the time. and i love what you said at the very end, too. this is a wonderful poem!!!!

overall this poem has a message i can understand, but your rhyming should be revised.. remember the golden rule: don't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming--it wont sound good. take care.. inna