please comment, i worked on this for like EVER!

I really liked this poem a whole lot. The whole thing flowed so nice, and in fact, my girl and I are on a two week break, and if it ever happened where we broke up, I would probably feel the exact same way. Great poem Molly, I liked it a whole lot. You are a great writer. One of the smoothest flowing poems that I have seen.

omg thanks so much! I really appretiate this comment a lot! so sweet, lol, good luck with your girl! I wrote this cuz of my first love... and i always think maybe he'll come back, but when he does im just afraid it will be too hard for me to let him back! thanks again!!