by Amerimov Sep 24, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You are apart, you suspended |
by Lillian
i wanted to see more in this one.. i get the gist, but i have seen you delve deeper in other poems.. i wanted you to go further.. more detail, more passion. good though.. i think i am wanting inside your mind.. so just tell me to shut up..lol |