by Amerimov Sep 24, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love I cannot feel |
by Lillian
(I hate to sound repetitous, but...) This poem speaks so honestly about what so many of us think and feel down in ourselves.. so again, I like the way you pull something so human and throw it into the light. The style here is great.. rhythmical without the sing-song quality.. nice flow and diversity of line structure. This is one of my favorites... |