hey you, that's a good one, i like styled poems and the content is very interesting too.
keep on going ;)

How can this natural occurrence,
Stop me wishing my death?
Like it cleanses my once-broken spirit
And returns the pace to my rhythmic breath. simply fantastic .. a simple theme but deliverd superbly ...

hey, That was an awesome poem, i really liked it, it had such depth and emotion, Great job, Keep it up