this is reely good and sweet i wish this stuff would happen to me *tear*
twisted=kendra

nice to trust someone when you fall.

kayla is this true? omg well if if's not it's really good and if it is call me!

I loved it. I'm sure that's how a first kiss feels like though unfortunately it hasn't happened to me yet. It was truely and amazing poem. I loved it.

I love your poem because the same thing happend to me *smile*

Man your first kiss must of been with a god, cuz i sure dont remember feelin all that on mine, basically a peck then go tell your friends..Awesome description with the poem though

Sweet poem, did this really happen to u? If it did ur really lucky cuz u probably got one of the good "GUYS" keep writin' ,keep the good poems Up . :)

Nice poem really felt it

its good someone feels that way in this world still it lets you know we still exist i liie your poem and i think that everyone should feel like that i hope that it continues to go that way for you and while you ad it check out my poem love is you might like it. you could use it if you like

AWww I love it! I want one of those guys!

It's sooo sweat! Just like a first kiss should be like!! 5/5 :)

I meant to say sweet not sweat! LOL, SORRY! :)

Omg that is exactly how my first kiss went !!!!!!!!!!!! so i rated it 5.0 luv it rate 1 of my new poems plz okeay well its really good keep writin