I've got my interpretations and from it, it think it's good. Crazy rhyme scheme though O.o
Aken Sol
BTW, i think im sensing a whole theme here.... hmmmm...lol

I've got my interpretations and from it, it think it's good. Crazy rhyme scheme though O.o
Aken Sol
BTW, i think im sensing a whole theme here.... hmmmm...lol

Awesome write. I like the whole "Dark.." theme of your last few writes:p...each one of them were profoundly different btw;). Your very versitile, deep and always a pleasure to read. This poem is more style of writing as far as rhyming and structure. You did an amazing job here. I'm impressed...keep em coming;)

Kev

Bold effort Sean, is this about meeting a beautiful girl and feeling kinda weird about not being perfect spiritually?...i recall feeling the same way not so long ago.....it's good work...i actually don't get pissed off when i read your poems....they have....a certain beat i can jig to..nice one...and lemme know on the meaning eh.

wow..This is a powerful poem!! could be interpreted in many different ways, I like that..very cool.
Great job

Another poem well done sir. This is my favorite so far out of the ones I've read and won't be surprised if it is my favorite by the end.