by Allen Sep 24, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Our hearts were pure |
by joe
wow, your really really good man, that was awesome your work is just grand |
by Sami
It touched me, and it put some perspective on the last month of my life, so thankyou, now only for writing a great poem, but for helping me understand how i've been feeling... (LOL, i can say, 'i know how you feel' now :-P) |
by SHYSTY23KO
Great poem! It sounds like you were deeply in love! Sorry about your hurt heart (lol) but really. Great poem though! Great job! |
WOW. I love the last stanza and how it's set out. the poem is beautiful, the flow and rythm of it is great. i'm sure i know why she still wants you, you never know a good thing until its gone. when she had you she didn't want you- why are so many people like that i wonder. anyways brilliant, magnificent poem. tc xmollyxx |
by giggles
ooh i wouldnt want to be that gurl let me tell u no offense or anything but that was the best that i have read of yours so far i just keep going back to it though |