This poem is about my ex... who still have feelings beyond friendship for me... *sigh*...

The last few lines are very well written..The poem is also very nice..Take care...FIVE

I loved this poem! Especially the ending...

Pain…
Time will erase
Me…
Another will replace
Love…
Will find your embrace
Happiness…
Will again shine on your face

Just wonderful! =) Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

OMG ALLEN!! Thats is such a beautiful poem! Absolutely stunning! I loved the last part its sooooo original!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!

dat such a good poem!!!!!! its sooooo fantastic!!!

ooh i wouldnt want to be that gurl let me tell u no offense or anything but that was the best that i have read of yours so far i just keep going back to it though

WOW. I love the last stanza and how it's set out. the poem is beautiful, the flow and rythm of it is great. i'm sure i know why she still wants you, you never know a good thing until its gone. when she had you she didn't want you- why are so many people like that i wonder. anyways brilliant, magnificent poem. tc xmollyxx
btw- i've added you to my favorites. you sooooo good :)

Great poem! It sounds like you were deeply in love! Sorry about your hurt heart (lol) but really. Great poem though! Great job!

It touched me, and it put some perspective on the last month of my life, so thankyou, now only for writing a great poem, but for helping me understand how i've been feeling... (LOL, i can say, 'i know how you feel' now :-P)
Keep up the good work
Love Sami xox

wow, your really really good man, that was awesome your work is just grand
-allen