FIRST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HOW AMAZING THIS POEMS STARTS , SUPERB BALANCE . HEAL MY HEART , HEAL MY SOUL .. THIS DRAWS ME INTO THE POEM AND I LOVE THE WAY IT WORKS .. HOWEVER THE ONLY REASON I CANT GIVE IT TOP MARKS IS THE ENDING SLIGHTLY DISRUPTS THE BALANCE .. ANYWAY WHO AM I TO SAY : ) 4.5 OUTA 5 . KEEP IT UP , I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEW WORK

FIRST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HOW AMAZING THIS POEMS STARTS , SUPERB BALANCE . HEAL MY HEART , HEAL MY SOUL .. THIS DRAWS ME INTO THE POEM AND I LOVE THE WAY IT WORKS .. HOWEVER THE ONLY REASON I CANT GIVE IT TOP MARKS IS THE ENDING SLIGHTLY DISRUPTS THE BALANCE .. ANYWAY WHO AM I TO SAY : ) 4.5 OUTA 5 . KEEP IT UP , I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEW WORK

Good start, but somewhat lost touch in the end. May b you got distracted or something...It was koool.

Keep up the good work!!!