Knife--A Very Good Friend...

by Saravana Kumar S   Sep 24, 2004


There is no point in living a life,
without coming close to edge of a knife,
a cut or two will help in keeping away,
the pain that has come into heart to stay.

when the pain exceeds and you nolonger can keep,
the only way to get out is take a knife and cut deep,
many people may not like what i say,
but many hearts have opted to go in this way.

To hold a knife in hand,you have to be really brave,
b'coz there is only one verdict,that is to enter the grave,
there is no looking back when the cut is made,
otherthan saying goodbye to all as everything will soon fade.

for a broken heart,knife has always been a good friend,
that takes away the pain with a deep cut from it's end,
as the blood drops from the edge of the knife,
death will soon come to end all the strife.

Many might think our life shouldn't end in this way,
when we were in pain,why did they choose to stay away,
it's better to die once for all from this pain,
than living a life with this pain coming again and again...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    great poem 5 stay strong

  • 20 years ago

    by Melissa

    WOW, what an amazing poem. I loved it and its so true.

  • 20 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    Yah, i used to think such thoughts. Then I got myself a personality.

  • 20 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    i love ur poems there gud..thanks for sayin u hope i feel better... sam

  • I don't agree with suicide. But you already admited that some may not agree with it! So what shall i say?

    The flow was good and the poem was written well. I hope you will never feel that way. Every night has a dawn awaiting... Every cloud has a silver lining.. Every storm ends up with a rainbow.... Oh there are a lot of them... Please stay strong thats all i wanted to say!
    Love, Trincy.