by PAUL HEWSON Sep 24, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Apologies for posting this in the love poetry section .. i had some real possitive feedback for devils coat when it was posted on "dark poems " but in two weeks it only has had 56 visits . if i recieve an objection to it being here i will of course delete it immediately .. |
by Lillian
paul - i read this before when you posted it originally.. i liked it then.. as i like it now. funny how it seems oddly appropriate to this section as well (must say something about my own state of mind, eh?).. "stinging sensation of the pouring rain" - my favorite line hands down.. excellent job.. truly a 5 in my book. |
thought provoking. smooth delivery |