OKay this is another song-I have music for it...(in my head anyway!) and really really love it...maybe you'll hear it on the radio some day!! yay!!! but anyways...I need a better title for it...so if you have any ideas......lol. Love you all and thanks for reading!!!

The lyrics was so touching. Many can relate to this. I am happy that you wrote a poem after looooong time. But if it is from true experience then i hope you feel better. About the title, i guess "No more" is good enough. TAke care hun.
Love, Trincy

Yep, I can't think of anyone who wouldn't be able to relate at least once in their life. I really liked this one.

I thought you stopped writing all together. Yay, glad to see you didn't leave!

oh my goodness, this is a song?? :D how cool, I thought it was just a great poem but come to think of it, yeah, you can put music to it.... *slap self* silly me, of cause ppl can put music to poems.... good work, maybe you can put some of your song on the net to share with us sometime ;)

No, I don't wanna hurt anymore
I'm tired of always falling
never hitting the floor.
and I don't wanna wish anymore
On that star in the sky
That kept my hopes a lie.

i know what u mean...great job on this one...its about time you started writing more! keep up the good work!
Love Always, Merrily