Bye Everybody, I'm Done.

by Marta   Sep 24, 2004


Standing here on the edge
I spread my arms out wide
I look up into the black sky
And the feelings rush inside.

I cannot stand being here
Breathing makes me ache
I'm just not sure any more
How much of this I can take.

So I stand here on the edge
No one has come to stop me
So I say why the f-*c-k not?
I'm now willing to be free.

I look nervously down
I think it's not very far
Well it sure will be better
Than making another scar.

I put the rope around my neck
And now I'm ready to sore
Like an angel with it's wings
I won't ever cut any more.

So this is how my suicide is
And I'm so happy to say bye
Tonight I shall spread my arms
And fly up high.

*I'm done with it. I can't stand it anymore. This will probably be my last poem on here. Unless of course, I fail. Maybe, maybe not. I can't really tell right now. But I've already got the rope around my neck. Thank you all for supporting my poetry, you won't be hearing from me any time soon.*
Elizabeth, Sharon Ardern, and Claire, hold on tight, you were my fav poets. Thank you for everything :)

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  • 20 years ago

    by jennifer

    This poem was amazing, now please don't do it! I lost my best friend the same way hang in there.

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Your an AWESOME poet and If this is true , Believe me ! Everyone is here for a REASON and every person is here for a DIFFERNT reason and when you think of this stuff think of how it not only effects you but it effects everyone else around you to so PLZ think about that , your young u have so much to live for, and any reason you think you have for dieing theres an even gr8r one for living TRUST ME .. If not ME TRUST UR FRIENDS .. ! Be Careful and KEEP writing .. Also check out my poems Id love ur comments and feedback ..!! !!
    =D Take Care

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    OH GOD MARTAaA!!!! please tell me your okay!!! Marta you are such an awesome poet and I can tell you have a beautiful soul!!!! I HOPE to GOD your okay!!!!! I feel so awful..SOOO terribly awful that I might never see another poem from you!!! Just from reading your poetry I KNOW that your a wonderful person!!! Please please please dont go!!!! You dont know how terribly sad I will be!! I hope hope hope your okay!!
    PLEASE email me and let me know at dark_blu_sky@hotmail.com
    PLEASE MARTA BE OKAY!!!!!!
    Love always!
    elizabeth.

  • 20 years ago

    by Kerri

    OMG...I love this poem i will cherish it forever..please dont do it..you have much more to live for and i know that coming from me..a past and present suicidal person...i am still here...im pushing my way through..please dont do it...reconsider it...youll agree later in life that it is the right thing to do...i have read your poems so many times and i care for you..even though you dont know me i do know you through your poetry. please dont do it...please email me and reconsider your thoughts...devils_eye24@hotmail.com

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    An excellent poem regardless of the subject matter. I'm so glad to see that you're still here..no matter how much better you might think you are off dead, you never are. You can never imagine the number of people you affect and inspire, the number of people that care about you and always will no matter if it seems like they do. I really hope that things get better for you.

    <33
    Erin

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