Take me as I am

by Perfect Little Secret   Sep 24, 2004


Since I'm just sitting here
Crying and holding fear
Northings worth it, northings real
Hold me close, but I won't feel
The knife is cold
Your games are getting old
I won't fight for you
I won't give in for you
Unless you can take me as I am
Please baby, take me as I am
I love you more than tears can know
I love you more than time may show
And time permitting I'll be willing
To give up it all and live fulfilling
You're so beautiful in your gauged ears
You're so cute when you help dry my tears
I've never felt this way before
I know baby, that I want it more
I can't describe this feeling I get
But if we're together, then I'm all set
Unless you can take me as I am
Please baby, take me as I am

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  • 18 years ago

    by Swe3t 16

    I think you have good ideas in this poem, I like the feel I mean, "take me as I am" now that is what everyone wants people to know. Maybe if you fixed up the first bit of the poem "Since I'm just sitting here
    Crying and holding fear
    Northings worth it, northings real" I think the first bit doesn't fit because your sitting here you need to say why you are sitting here, because it doesn't flow good from then on untill the middle section. But once you fixed that bit up, it will be really really good, not that it isn't great already because it is!!

    ur a great poet, keep it up hunnie,
    ps: check out some of my new poems and thanks for your comment!
    love swe3t xxxxxxxxx)

  • 20 years ago

    by Sarah

    True love is felt here...may you keep writing and continue to express yourself so honestly!! Bravo!!

    Sarah

  • 20 years ago

    by Perfect Little Secret

    this poem is for the guy i'm in love with, please comment and rate it.

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