Insane Or Not? Part 1

by Amy   Sep 24, 2004


"Hello Rachel
How are you today"
~Last night I slit my wrists
With a razor blade~
"Yes, I heard about that
How did you sneak it in?"
~I did it because
I needed to cut away my sin~

"I see you wont answer
So our session will begin"
~Your all the same
Your just like him!~

"Who Rachel? Your step dad?
The one you killed?
Why did you do it?
Why did his blood you spill?"

"Did he mistreat you?
Touch you in wrong ways?
Or call you horrible things
Rachel, were you afraid?"

Silence.

"Rachel, I need you to tell me
What happened that night
Was there a struggle?
Did you two have a fight?"

~I saw it!
With my very own eyes~
"Rachel, what did you see?"
~YOU were there too!~
"No, stop with the lies"

~He deserved what he got~
"Now, Rachel thats not true"
~If I didn't do something
Id be lying in a coffin too~

"It's all in you mind, Rachel
This world you've created
Nurse! I think the patient
Needs to be sedated"
~NO! I'm not outta my mind!~
"You just IMAGINED him a threat"
~I know what he did
I cannot forget~

"Nurse! Wheres that needle?"
~NO!! I'm perfectly fine~
"No your not Rachel,
Besides, It's medication time"

~Don't you understand
Why wont you listen to me~
"Thats why your here Rachel
You've lost your sanity"

"You slit your fathers throat
Then wrote your name on the wall
With his very own blood
Smeared all over the halls"
~It wasn't me!!
Why wont you believe?
Ive been framed
Ive been deceived!~

"Got the needle nurse?
Good, now hold her still
Don't worry, It wont take long
For your veins to be filled"

~NOO!! IT WAS YOU!
I SAW YOU THERE THAT NIGHT!~
"NURSE! Hold her down
She's hysterical with fright"

"There isn't that better?
Take her back to her cell
She needs her rest
Make sure she sleeps well"

"Rachel you look so tired
I think its enough for today"
~Your going to hell
I hope you have time 2 pray~

"Goodbye Rachel
*Whispers* Now don't say a word
Ha ha who am I kidding
Its not like you'll be heard.."

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  • 20 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    You are such an excellent poet. I LOVED this poem. I wish I could write like that.

  • 20 years ago

    by Tina

    You are Awesome!! That was great and i love it so much..good job hun!
    Tina

  • 20 years ago

    by Jennifer Fox or Jackson

    This poem was awesome...It sounded so real! Keep up the great work! chows 4 now...jennie

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this was very intense! Awesome job as per usual! I loved this piece and can't wait till the next part!! Great job!

  • 20 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    Wow... Such a tragic story. Amazingly written. I loved it...