by Robert Sep 25, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
You courted me like a friend I never had, |
by Vanessa
I took from you all that you have taken in jest, |
by Shædow Poet
Nice poem... I don't truly like the style of it; I think that if it was more in stanzas (even two sentence ones) then it would seem less cluttered and easier to read, but, that's just a readers opinion. |
by Brookeღ
Yes this is a bit different than the poem I wrote Set Free! I really enjoy your style and your way with words. I would love to learn from reading your poems. Another amazing poem! Brooke |
Very interesting and unique.... I loved it though it was excellent!5* |
by Dorotea©
Hmm, I don't really know what to say about this poem. Some parts I truly enjoyed, but there were some parts that I think need some more work, some parts that are a bit clumsy. Work on those a bit more, but otherwise good poem, very expressing words you used. |