I enjoyed it.

"The greed you had, gave birth to the hate in me, now it is my final revenge that will set you free."
Powerful last lines, Robert! Is this from the subject I gave you late last week? Definitely seems like it. Your turn to send me one.

Fantastic poem Robert, I have enjoyed your poems very much. Please continue to write more. Timothy r

Wow, stud, you are on the top recent rated!

Well, i guess this would be the BEST of your work. T_T "Close but no cigar" but it was good none the less...

Wow, your poem is the best I have read in a long time, it's hard to find good poetry here sometimes. Half way through I was getting the impression you were some kind of gangster or underworld figure or something. But it was captivating so keep writing.
-Incognito

wow... that was long and great! i liked it alot, though it was kinda dark. 5/5

I really emjoyed reading this poem. It was brilliant, defiently one that kept me intrested
well done
xox

Hmm, I don't really know what to say about this poem. Some parts I truly enjoyed, but there were some parts that I think need some more work, some parts that are a bit clumsy. Work on those a bit more, but otherwise good poem, very expressing words you used.
Satuxxa

Very interesting and unique.... I loved it though it was excellent!5*

Yes this is a bit different than the poem I wrote Set Free! I really enjoy your style and your way with words. I would love to learn from reading your poems. Another amazing poem! Brooke

Nice poem... I don't truly like the style of it; I think that if it was more in stanzas (even two sentence ones) then it would seem less cluttered and easier to read, but, that's just a readers opinion.
Very... vengeful. It reminds me of the movie "vertigo", I like it, it's a nice dark poem, however realistic it seems (and could be).
"Then something happened, I never expect it would,
a voice demanding me to live, telling me I could.
It was metallic, this voice that called my name,
and it told me I was not to blame."
Those were my favourite lines in this poem, the "metallic" really drew my imagination.
A nice effort! Well done!

I took from you all that you have taken in jest,
I poured hell down your throat so you would be Satan's guest.
This has to be my favorite part. Again the imagery was vivid, and the emtions were poiuring out with every word. Well writen peice of poetry you have here. 5/5