Wonderful job! I feel the exact same way! You did a terrific job at conveying the pain... this poem flowed so well! You're such a terrific writer! Wonderful job!!

Amy

Awsome writting. Past expierences we sometimes never get over. but we have to learn to cope with them, and suck it up to do our best. Being used is something that im used to, and being blindsided by love is something that happens to me all the time, just as i break in and tell them things they go and hurt me. Ive been cheated on, used, abused, hated, and regreted. And thats by the same guys that told me they wanted to be together forever. I think a lot of people go through it. and i hope that you see you'll soon get over it, or get it past you. Great poem. Loved your choice of words, keep up the good work sweetie.

omg i know exaclty how that feels really good poem!!!

I just lost my boyfriend and I can totally relate to it. It was also very well put together

Amy, I think yoou are incredible, this is so incisive, penetrating and great choice of words. Nice read, keep it up

showed emotion very well, could feel your pain and was reminded of that pain. Great work ........as usual (lol)
have a great one =)
~pB~