I don't know what to say...but...good poem..

Awesome poem Chloe :-D I'm sorry that you feel that way :-(

Hey Chloe.
this is a very good ant touching poem!!! if you are in a kind of this situation, i am sorry, but i was in a kinda situaion like this too, and i'm sure you'll make it and stand through it, as i do. Í hope you read this. Keep up your great work. Love

hiya babe, i think this is a really great poem, im sorry you feel like you do. ur very talented.
emz xxx

I could relate to everything you said, except for one verse. Even the 13 years part, since I am soon to be thirteen. Just a couple more weeks...wonderful poem, Chloe, it was just absolutly wonderful. Now, you are probably wondering which verse I couldn't relate to, it was this one:

"I don't need anyone,
to reach a helping hand,
I've learned to depend on myself,
for you will never understand."

The first two lines, I just couldn't relate to, because unlike you, I do need a helping hand, I almost think it would help. As for the last two lines...I agree. Stay strong girl.

Megan §

Very nice poem. I wont say much for your politics, but your poetry is very nice. good rhyme and rhythum. keep em comin.