wow.....uh is this just a sotry you invented....wow it is very touching! i hope to read more! you have the whoile emotion jerking thing down! keep in touch!
lexi lou

This is a very sad write-and I hope this isn't a true story. Because it is hard to lose someone you truly love and suppose to marry. Keep Writing! God Bless.

Libby

thats a great poem. Poems with references to personal experiences always mean so much more.

I've been reading your poems they all are very good .I like this one even thugh it is very sad you put the words together well.Great job

This poem is so personal , im surprised you posted it , but it is amazing and i nearly started crying reading it, its so sad, you got talent!

Thank you for all your comments