by My Obsεssion Sep 26, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
For you: |
I love this poem more each time I read it! I like the change you made to that last stanza. |
Great poem....keep them coming....take care ...FIVE |
by Cantchangeme
Excellent poem truly beautifully written :) |
by Gracie Jo
A wonderful poem! =) I loved it. You write very well and I loved your whole style of this one. Keep it up and take care! |
by Kevin J
Love the format and structure...I'm steeling it btw:) This was an awesome idea for a poem. You gave it a kind of dream like quality. You put this together nicely...I'm impressed. This was really enjoyable..no doubt! |