This was really good too.. I liked it.... I really liked the lines "feels like I'm the board and you just threw a dart" very creative.. Keep it up..
Liz

Like Angel, I was going to comment on the line you wrote. It was very unique and I liked it a lot. I hope things work out with you and your ex. The little thing you wrote at the end...it happened to me...and finally I just moved on. Stay strong, girl.

xxx Megan § xxx

Hey, i really liked your poem and i kinda know what your going through. i really do understand. i dont know what i can say to help you but i will try.... its hard it really really is, but you have to get over him. guys are immature and childish and thry screw up alot. just be strong and prove to him that you dont need him that he needs you. women can survive with out guys but guys can not survive with out women. so just show him hes missing out and he just might come back. read some of my poems and see if there like what your going through and if they are email me and maybe we can talk about it and both of us can help each other. hope all goes well and god bless!
Much love,
~Kay~

thnx for all your comments! it means a lot and thnxfor all the advise!-kristina

I just wanted to thank u on commenting on my poem, it means alot because i love to write. i love this peom u wrote also. i also have another name Brokenprincess if u wann cehck out those poems. thanks again

Omg!!!! i know exactly how you feel. those were my exact feelings when my ex broke up with me...but i guess theres just summin better for us???

I love it, Kristina. I love the part about the board and dart. But here:
"nothing would be knew"
Did you use the right new?
Take Care
Erica

I love it, Kristina. I love the part about the board and dart. But here:
"nothing would be knew"
Did you use the right new?
Take Care
Erica