Man this is Kickass,
Very Creative,
i love it like hardcore,
And its true the World is like an audince they like to watch us suffer in pain....

Thank you samerz! I'm on my way to check out some of your poems right now!

This was really really good.. Your rhymes were awesome... Great great job i give you a five.... of course
Liz

Thanks Angel! :)

Well thank you sunkissedXin! i will check out some of yours also!

wow, that was a really good poem, keep it up Much love

awesome poem, very imagitive and creative, great job i love it

Wow, I really liked it. Very creative. Excellent work. <3333

thats amazenly sad, your pain is so real in this poem, most people who write about their own death and killing themselfs dont show the pain they feel, they just end it. you did an awesone job of letting your reader become you, and experence how you feel...

holy shyt batman! your such a great writter. I LOVE IT. ALONG WITH ALL YOUR WORK. awesome job. 5

~!~Noelle~!~