Nice
You’ve done so much to trigger pain,
Your guilt, your death, you cannot feign.”

these lines are so relevant and say so much...u are really talented

hats off to you
Take care....Ani

Wow- I don't have any words to comment on, truly well written, I think I will check out some more of your work now!

argh, my little heart can't hear so dark words anymore, you can really good deal with words, how do you do that, eat books ;)

Very good again! haunting images.

That message, I can now release
With reckless voice, I speak with ease.
My presence now is everywhere-
A haunted soul with not a care.

Just wow these lines are just so good, The flow is so good this series is totally amazing

Love, Peace and Empathy

Cantchangeme

This stuff is too cool!

Suck a great write, is this the last of the Haunted Soul?? oh how I wish there are more :) You have such a good talent, keep it up girl :)

And it all comes together. Great way to end it and it flowed together like a song. Plus they were long parts and easy to keep up with. Nice job, I'll look foreward to reading some more tomarrow. Right now I gotta go to bed. Take care~

--Bryce~

I enjoyed the entire series. And have to second that the ending was particularly great.

wow u r a gr8 poet.

what a great job. This was truely a perfect ghostly series. I gave you a 5 on all three. You have a great way of using words. Talented very! Well Great Job on all of these.

I really like this poem you have really great talent i love all your poems