Nobody will ever know, and nobody
will ever understand that murder
in Johnstown always ends up turning
to stone.

Like the last para ....overall good writte...nice and easy language doesnot seem forced pretty cool abt the gargoyle too....
Take care
aNI

Hey, just wanted to say Hi since I havent seen ya in a while. Looks like you're still writing on strong, this ones a good one. Sorry this is the only poem I can comment on, I barley have enough time to do that. Well anyway, dont lose your poetic touch while I'm away now, I expect to see some wicked new ones when I come back ;). Take care

--Bryce~
"May darkness be thy sweet serenity forevermore."

This was good, i thought of two things immediately. one was that it made me think of the movie Jeepers Creepers until you said Gargoyle, and two: my poem: Socialite or Parasite? it's short. Please read it.
The third to last line, did you mean murderER?

i like that it was neat i will agree the catch of it was cool to not to many people that can do that you should check my the werewolf and the vampire out

oh..cool poem!!! never read anything like it! very good!

it seemed abit choppy for me but I like the imagination in it you are creative I will give you that well will look at abit more of your work here