Well, this one took my breath away.... strong feeling and emotions in this poem. thank you for reading my work. it is very much appreciated. i think this one deserves a deffinate 5. keep up the great work :)

This was absolutely awesome.. damn relatable .. superbly expressed.. love the way it spoke to me.. :D..you're damn good.
a 5/5 ..hands down :D

keep it up

~Wake~