the rhyming is a little mixed, but still great poem!!

i liked this poem. i liked how you portrayed how everyone was abused and manipulated by the father, and how he never thought of what horrible pain he was causing. and o ya, andrea, not meaning to sound mean but a poem never HAS to rhym

what a great poem, was this true? If so i'm sorry you have had such a rought start in life. But everything will get better. If not then what a great imagination. i had wonderful visuals expecially the train station part. I thought it discerved a 5

yep, this poem is baised on my life.

lol nice sarah, oh how is your bro I haven't seen him since holween, I think its funny how some of these poems are really true and they think its just a poem anyways I give it a 5 it was good, and had all the true facts to bad this isnt even half of it, I hope to talk to you soon we have alot o talk about with cassy jon alex u know all of them Cya around Mel NICE ASS POEM