I thought this one was absolutely GREAT! I surely wished I had your talent. GREAT WORK! I enjoy so much. lol

wow, that is good! the way you have written this is indescribable!

amazing. this is one of my favorite poems from you. its so beautiful and it can relate to everyone caz its like the first thing we do if something bad happens and theres no one there to comfort us we either break down or go to a world that isnt real to pretend that we are comforted and that nothing went wrong. and you said all that in such a beautiful way, your so gifted and talented**

I don't think it's lame. I think this is really good. I have a place like that in my head too. good jaob! ~dandy~

It;s not lame, babe, it's very expressive