NOW THATS POETRY ... TOP MARKS
.. I READ IT OVER AND OVER AND IT GOT BETTER AND BETTER .. AS STORMY SAID IT IS BERY TOUCHING . STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART ..

This is such a cute poem, I cant find words .. I loved it .. And every word in it .. lol .. Check otu mine if ya get a chance Id love to know what u think .. well THNX again .. and AWESOME JOB .. !
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i liked this poem and i'm glad that you chose to write about this. I like how you said "god needed another angel" its very pretty. i love how you described the mother holding on untill her children said it was alright to let go, that was lovely.

Hey i loved it so much i need to comment to u, my is dieing and i don't want her to go, i am only 15 1/2 and have a full life ahead of me, an di need her there by my side, she has lupus and she had a stroke two years ago on my b-day she has been sick since then, she has her good days but her bad days take over. I can't watch her when there is nothing i can't do, when i am just standing around going to school and doing my cross country and then hanging with friends, i could be next my mom with full support but u know how hard it is when u next ur mom and last thing u want is for here to die in ur arms, thats not going to happen to me, i won't let it, my mom tries to talk to me about what would happen if she died, she can't bring it up because i get pissed and so sad, some of my friends aren't close to their mothers, and when they see me and my mom they wish they had it, i don't want to be the gurl in years later saying i wish i even had a mom, because my dream my life and my soul and my moms creations. their is no way i can even write to u with out crying while tping but for sum reason the only person on earth that belongs to be heatlhy is my mom;.....i can't live in pain thinking tomorrow my mom won't open her eyes, i can stand that i could be at school while she is tons of pain at home and can't take the pain, so god takes her away, for heaven is an awsome place but not right now for my mom, i need to beable i can say good bye and hold her one more time justbefore she goes because my heart is breaking and this time it isn't over a guy.

Sorry about ur lost, i don't know what would be w/o my mother. God bless you and take care,

lyssa

Thanks to all of you for your comments. I appreciate it so much. Sometimes in life we deal with things the best way we can, so therefore once and a while it does you good to let things out. And to you Alyssa, I'm so sorry to hear your bad news. I thought I couldn't do without mine too. But with God's strength and his goodness he will guide you and be my your side. My thoughts and prayers with be with you and your family. God Bless and Take Care to All. Thanks Again. lol

Your poem was awesome! it was one of the best ive read! good job!

:( sad poem

aww this was soo beatiful... aww i wish i could write something like that to my momma.. maybe i will for mothers day.. haha *thnx for the comment*

<3 az