by in the realm of Chaos Sep 28, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I'm a girl, and not much more. |
by Andrea
i dont think its too much rhyme. good poem! |
by *tanya*
yay go girl! :D |
GURL POWER!!!! yeah! its to the point and very bold! u tell 'em hunni! |
by Eibutsina
I loved the rhyming - i think the poem itself could be well elaborated and sort of a lil more in depth - you have picked a great subject something i am really passionate about actually and i think this is a great attempt ...id be happy to help with a resubmittion but this is a great effort! Check out some of my work id appreciate your feedback also! |
by vanessarrr
no, the rhyming's good. i liked it! is it about girl power? hmm.. i liked how you wrote it though. take care:) |