alot better the work seem to flow more this time and you seemed more confedent in what you said good job keep it up you will get there

oh my god! i love it! reminds me of me... i've been trying to find one, that i can realate too.... but, this is the onei found! lyl!

yeah, awesome poem! so lucky to find the one that makes you comfortable in your skin, makes you feel good about yourself & relationship. i envy you... lol. take care:)