Hey... I have read alot of poems from many mnay plp on this site and i have to say this is a very very good poem... i love the way u put so much depth and emotion into ur writing about the gurl of ur dreasm but shes more then just ur dreams shes ur reality... this si a very moving poem i loved it! keep up the great writing.. God Bless

Sammie B**

Hey----
this is an awesome poem. It has so much emotion. great Job check out some of my poems later if you have a chance....
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Amanda