first off, welcome to the site! very nice poem. cool rhyming and i liked how you started and ended it. tells me how this person means to much to you. hope we see more of your poetry. take care:)

that was such a touching poem. sounds like u really do care. uve helped me see something today that my ex keeps saying to me i wanna thank you for that. anyway good work look forward to more 5/5

abby xxxxx