Surprise!!!

by Kristal Sowiecki   Sep 28, 2004


She hears the knocking
Of somebody stalking
This girl outside her window
But what she doesn't know
Just as carefully as the wind blows
He's crept inside
Creeping
Careful not to make a creaking
Of the floor beneath his feet
But creak creak creak
Goes the floor beneath his feet
She hears the noise
The soft soft noise
At the stairs outside her room
And then a loud
BOOM!
He flies through the door
Running across the floor
At this girl
But his head is in a whirl
For the girl was not there
She was carefully hiding
Slowing abiding
Waiting
For the right moment
When then she emerged from the closet
With a rather large knife
She then took the intruders life
She threw him down the stairs
With little despair
Turned around
And continued on
Brushing her hair

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  • 19 years ago

    by Josh Sowiecki

    I hate hearing these type of poems come from someone as sweet as you but it's a good poem none the less.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ very nice this one too. keep writing, you'll do good in no time
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

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