Comments : I am trying

  • 20 years ago

    by Bobby Brownlie

    great poem i enjoy all of your poems and i hope to read more of your work heep up the great work and good luck in all that you do again great job i loved the poem!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarrah

    A lot of people read this and edited it before I would even let myself put it in this website but here it is enjoy!
    ~Sarrah