A, sorry...a friend of mine passed away when i was in 9th grade...he was my best buddy...dont talk abt it...nice poem really really nice

Take care...and remember ppl rent immortal but memories are....

Oh my word... I'm so sorry Joy. =( My thoughts and prayers go out to you and Jensyn's family. I know how you feel, I lost my best friend too. Keep your head up, things will get better.

~Karrie

Feel sorry for the loss of ur friend...I pray for his parents and friends...Nice poem...Take care...FIVE>>>

that is so sad!

This is such a meaningfull poem about how you feel for your friend. All I can say is that I'm very sorry for you, her family and all other people who were close to her. Your only 13 but you are blessed with the talent to write poetry. I must say I'm impressed.

Take care

OMG AWESOME POEM that is so sad, thank god i've never lost a close close friend. im so sorry, awesome poem

im so sorry about your friend.. i know it shard but try nd stay strong nd keep up the good work

This is really good. Im ver very sorry for your lose.

Im sorry this happened to a good friend of yours. Its hard to lose a good friend and it tough on everyone. Shes away from her pain though watching over you.

[poem wise--
Why were you there?
What was wrong?
Then it hit us,
Like a bad chord in a song.

That was my favorite stanza, it says alot about your friends and how much they worried for her. great job and keep strong =]