wow i thought this was great. What a sincere apology. This poem reminds me of my relationship with my best friend like we try and try yet i'm the one who will not make the effort to make things right. I just blow her off time after time. Anyways i think i need to call her now......Great Poem.

great job, i really like this poem, a lot of emotion and ver sincere (sp?) I think after things calm down between you and your friend and they read this, they will know that you only meant the best. Great job keep it up and take care

Oh wow that is actually quite sweet of you eirisa!!TO say your moving on but if she nees to call you'll still help her push through..i just cant beleive she dont see what she's gunna be missing..But i think once she realizes your gone she'll miss you and want your friendship to still continue..If not she lost the best person ever!! You do an amazing job writeing Eirisa you seem to impress me more and more!! Great job i truley loved this one!

HI Jackie: Please do call her girl cause my b/f has been kinda blowing me off the way your talking about, not that its not right, but i would love the chance to actually talk to her the way we used to talk - i hope it works out for you...
HI Sarah: Yes you and i seem to have the same ideas i think LoL your comments and feedback are so valued i hope your friend realises what she is loosing when she lets you go
HI Jennifer and Meena: Thanks girls
HI Chelsey: My girl, my baby sis what can i say your comments always bring tears of happiness to my eyes! Im glad i have found such a true friendship with you girl! xoxo

LUV YALL EIRISA xoxo

Very nice poem! I loved it. Your writing is so awesome, I look forward to reading more from you soon! Thank you for all of the sweet, encouraging comments on my poems. It truly does mean a lot to me and brings a smile upon my face. Please take care of yourself! =)

~Grace

gr8 job again gurl .. i luv all ur work .. hey well last i called he wont durr so ill try again and tell ya .. haha .. u kno wat i mean dont ya .. well email me soon .. gave ya a 5 !

wow that poem is powerful.. it made me a lil sad, especially since ive been through that... i love it!! great job!!

Hey, This was a great poem... again... My favorite line was:

But all in my entire girl I promise I tried my best
To help our friendship overcome this final test

Those are the best lines.... also i hope things are better with you and your friend.. Keep up the great work.. And yeah you're already on my favs list
Angel
(my name is Liz by the way but shhh don't tell anyone)

Thanks Angel (liz Lol) Your secret is safe with me!

you really do have a special talent! i can' even tell you in words how amazing your poem is! it sounds like you have been going through a lot of pain, and i for one can understnad and feel it too. i have fallen out with my friend and im in the same position. i will always be there for her, but just like you say in your poem, you need to move on. i really do hope things work out for you and you friend, times a good healer. sooner or later a door will open for you and things will work out how you want them too and you dreams will come true. anyway, take care, luv lucy xx just keep smiling and don't let people bring you down xx