You broke your promise

by Rachael/7MidniteTears   Sep 29, 2004


We just had a fantastic and marvelous date
We had just finished dinner a little after eight
We went to a hotel and we freshened up
He took a shower then gave me a champange cup
We finished it up, and said lets take a nap
But then he refused and said to sit on his lap
But then he gave me a surprise, he took off all my clothes
then he gave me kisses all over from my lips to my toes
He said don't be afraid I will never break your heart
I responded and said will we ever be apart?
He responded with a yes and a kiss on my lips
He started working downward till he got to my hips
I told him lets stop and give it a rest
He obeyed and hurried and quickly dressed
Tommarow when i passed by his big house
I saw him outside going in a girl's blouse
I told him it was over and that we were through
But i felt sad inside and that i would never be his boo
But then again he broke my heart
And he didn't keep his promise of keeping us apart

*some of the rhyming is lame so it only took me 5min*but please comment

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  • 20 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heartfelt, but a beautiful poem. Great job. If you get a chance check out some of mine. lol

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