i liked your poem "the vampire and the werwolf", but im sry i really, really disliked this one. it had no meaning to me, no actual poetry in it, it sounded to me like you were just flattering yourself because a girl had a cursh on you. "we hadnt even had sex YET?" that pretty much says to me you were planning on screwing her then dumping her. this didnt even seem like a poem to me, sorry. i like your other one.

dis reminds of my brother and my ex bestfrend it woz funny aswell