by Cantchangeme Sep 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Wow that was just plain amazing. I loved the rhyme scheme and everything. Sounds like it would make an awesome song too! |
by vanessarrr
you've outdone yourself on this one! excellent, excellent poem. i liked the way you wrote it, your rhyming, and how you repeated the title. |