by Hailey
Thankx..So True...Were All Classed As Just Another Teen..Not The Future Like We Are..People Need To Open Their Eyes And Give Us All A Chance..Ive Been Placed In Nearly every Catageory Of Just another Troubled Teen At One Stage Or Another...When In Fact..I Was Raped..Hadnt Told Anyone and Was Trying To Deal With Not Killing Myself..Dont Judge...Take Time..Look A Little Deeper..Behind The Cuts,drugs,the booze..Theres A Problem...thanx |
by Eibutsina
Hello Hailey |
OMG! Your poem is so true in everyway. So many young kids feeling and thinking different things, never to tell their parents for whatever reason. Sometimes people don't want to look beneath the surface until one day something hits them and they have to. Great work! |
i so agree...im like, speechless right now..that was so awesome...like holy cow..this is by far one of the BEST poems I've ever seen...It was amazing..so true and deep and meaningful..and just incredible...man..awesome job girl, loved it, 5 all the way. |
this ia great i can i know people who have to live likfe this every day and its not good.. amazing poem u captured every emotion. amazing |
Wow excellent poem.. wow just wow... I looked at it and saw it was long and i was like arg.. then when i finished i was like that's all... Great Great Great fantastic poem.. MAJOR props about talking about this.. It was amazing... you are awesome really this was great.. I'd say i'm speachless but then why am i still talking... Anyways.. again great great poem.. yeah hehe Keep it up.. Take care |
by Just a girl
Wow that was excellent! :O All i can is like wow lol I loved it keep it up! i wish you could show this to the world <3 Steph |
whoah...you got a lot of talent.itz an awsum poem, keep up the good work, wish i cud write like you |
Oh my god, wow. I just sat their speachless. Maybe today I am just reading through great poems, but I never usually go speachless. Oh good god, this poem was just awesome. I can`t really put it into words, but geez. Great job, girl. I think this one captured everyone`s heart. Take care. ;) |
WOW!! That was SUCH an amazing poem! Its SOOO true. I know kids like everything you've explained above. I think everyone does!! Its so amazing! You're a great writer! |
by *Elizabeth*
WOW!!!!! This poem is so amazing I don't even know what to say!! HOLY CRAP!! ths is soo amazing!! SOOO sOOOO SOOO amazing!!! i luv it soo much!!! great job!! |
by Hailey
Thankyou So Much everyone..Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou...Its So Great When I Get Feedback Like This..Thanx...It Is True..Ive Been In Those Catagories And I Want People To realise That Were Not Just Another Teen...We Shouldnt All Suffer In Silence..Thanx |
by Jessy
WOW I LOVE this poem it is really great and sad but wow its awsome keep righhteing and check me out sometime |
OMG girl that's perfect! That was great, it really shatters that stupid image that parents and adults have about teens having it easy and you can blame it on other things and never really see what's actually happening. Did you know people have written this poem as their fav poem on the site? i gotta say it's one of my favs now too. :) keep writing, you're incredible. |
by Shædow Poet
Excellent.. brings up real issues, and definetely tells us that some stupid people should WAKE UP and see what kids REALLY FEEL LIKE! Well written, an issue I am very passionate about. |