Wish it is not true..reminded me of the pains, questions and fever of loss. This is definately a number 1 sad thriller.

Sad. Cruelly thought provoking. more like. These things happen all the time, but it never gets easier to hear about, or to bear. Not much changes, either. Also, thanks for voting for my poems. ^v^ Kepp writing, and I'll keep reading. Peace, love and empathy.
-Belle Misericordia

That's so sad ....

thats so sad but its a good poem
twisted=kendra

Oh, my gosh, it is so beautiful, I wish I could write like that!! It made me cry

hmm..i like the simple no non sense way the story unfolds..gives it a really raw feel

Great poem. Keep it up!

~Grace

true beauty comes frome death and the beauty you brought to life in words is indescribable by words... i liked the structure and how you managed to make the rhymes work every time... keep up the good work...

sincerely,
BlackRose... a.k.a. the beauty in death