by Robert Sep 30, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
Never Ending Gift |
by Vanessa
It was kind of hard to follow in a couple of places, but it was really touching, it almost made me cry. the emtion was strong and raw, the word choice was excellent, and the message was clear, and needed to be made. You did an excellent job, very powerful. |
Such a Heavy Message!!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
The making of the bread almost had religious connotations to me xx |
by Amanda
This was good. Thanks for the comment but i do not want to change my poem as it is my feelings on that day. I only write what is in my heart. If i changed it it wouldn't be true to me :) |
Very creative Robert. Powerful and intriguiging (I'm sorry I'm useless at spelling) |