*Hey Nick*
I really liked it..but don't kill yourself..
:)Keep on writing...Be strong...
5/5...Good Work... I liked the expressiveness...
~Best Of Luck 2 Your Upcoming Poems!~ Check out mine...

**With Love Sedusha**

Aww this is so sad. Hun Suicide isn't the answer. Please don't think that. Just keep your head up!!! =) Take care and keep writing!

~Grace

I love the poem! But I can't say to stop because I have tied many times.
But keep writeing!!

short simple right to the point and great.