Wow....wat do u get when two of the best poets in the site combine to write a poem...u get rocked out of your world...i wish i was as good....
You are so damn good both of u...maybe someday i'll be 1/2 as good...
Take care..Ani

Our hearts still live, living with love
My heart flies away, on an angels wings
On the wings of hope, of a angel-like dove
Still the angel soars, and still it sings

love these lines they mean a lot to me....

amazing piece! i've commented on GoldenTear's poem as well. i really hope you guys make more. i enjoyed every line. excellent. take care:)

that was awesome, great work

oooh i loved reading this 1 ...gr8 work guys.
.But my serenity can't be serene without you
tht's my fav line...keep writing!

Wow, another great poem. I really love the way you write, it's captivating. This one is beautifully tragic, moving and well written. Keep up with the great work, I'll keep reading!