Very dark, Very interesting, Very brilliant, a very inspirational poem, love it

*is fading into laconic chants as u read this* (lol) kewl poem..

Hmm...this one is definitely different, but you pulled it off well. 5.0!

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wow. that was really awesome. the words are very moving and i just can't explain how i feel. you truly amaze me...

dystopia:an imaginary place where people lead dehumanized and often fearful lives.

once again, that was amazing. take care

Amazing! Very deep, excellent use of words. Keep it up!