Hey Av - very deep i found this piece but still full of validity and emotion - it actually really had me thinking this poem - i did have to read it a few times (due to complex language used) to get and understanding and rhythm in my head but it was well worth it and that language simply added to its effectiveness on the reader - a great Av you should be proud :o)

Luv Eirisa

thanx a ton erisa! it really feels rockin' good to hear appreciation! hahahah