heya...its excellent! give ya 5 for that one...heheh..like ur style..n this poem is oh so cute! hehe
bis.
miri

I love This Poem! Its greatlky written
xoxo

your poem was great have a nice day

Awesome poem..so deep and true...amazing job <3 xxxx
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Excellent poem. I loved it. Keep it up and take care! =)

this is really good i know how you feel!

Very sad story - but a great poem
Thanks for sharing

Luv Eirisa

i can totally relate to this...my boyfriend-well ex-boyfriend just did this to me. He told me he needed to figure things out, then he'd give me a call. well its been almost 3 weeks and still no word, but i talked to his friend today and he said that hes back with his ex. so believe me when i say...i feel your pain. you should read my poem called, "my thoughts" i wrote it right after he broke up with me. Peacez ~ crystal

Hey, nice poem! I think that's where my relationship is goin...so, i might be able to relate l8er on...anyways...PLZ read and comment on some of my poems! they are, "Haunting Me" "Don't Care What They Think" "You've Gone Away" and "Hidden Treasure"
THANK U!!