very creative concept. i loved it a lot! wow, i don't know what else to say to praise you... you're so awesome. take care:)

Great poem Allen. I really enjoyed reading it. It all flowed so well and it was just wonderful! =) Keep it up and take care of yourself!

~Grace

*Allen*
This poem was great! Expressive..creative.. I really enjoyed reading this poem! Keep it up! 5/5..
~Best of Luck to your upcoming poems!~ Check out some of my;)
^Take Care^

**With Love Sedusha**

A frequent confussing thought... You wrote it in a different way...In my mind, this is a familiar debate..

A dream for acheiving a dream... Nice write dear.. Keep going!
Love, Trincy.

cool! this poem portrays a way I feel, but in a totally "spankin' new" perspective!
awesome! luv ya,blarg

awwwwwwwwww its so sad allen!!!! but soo well written, i loved the wording and 'walking the plank' is very creative! its such an awesome poem, just lyk ur such an awesome poet! luv yah!

Yes, very well-written poem! Keep up the great work!

very well written and i can relate cant wait to read more with love giggles

Wow Allen...just, wow. I don't even know what to say...:)

"Ignorance paints it blank"
loved this line!
great poem... :-)

Another good one Allen!! Bothering You again.. =P But You're Asian.. Coolie, I'm Asian too.. (A) But I don't Life in Asia anymore.. =) Are You Chinese?? I'm most part Vietnamese with a bit Chinese blood.. =) But I Live in Holland (Europe..) =) Anyway, I know how Asian parents can be strict.. You don't wanna know *Talking out of experiences* =P Ghihi, anyway.. Thanks for Your mail.. =) I do get Your story.. I don't know well how to respons on that.. I have a rule with My best friend that we would never date or kiss or whatever with one of the guys she or I had a crush on or kissed.. =) But I do Believe that everything happens for a reason.. So it might hurt now, but afterwards You'll see that it's better to be friends?? Evertime I try to forget about that guy I say that to Myself and "Just save Your Love for someone new, You know some day will come soon.. You will find out that it wasn't meant for You!!" It's of "Song of Love" =) But I talk kinda too much.. AGAIN.. =$ SORRY!! But I liked Your poem, I know how it feels.. *Sights* Anyway: Take care now and have a great day!!

Ciao xXx Me

Thank you all for reading and commenting!!! :) I love you all :D:D:D This is one of my favourite piece... but sad... Anyway, I treasure all your kind words :) I would love to reply one by one but... yeah :D I got a bit lazy :) Will do from now on tho :)

I love that poem. I've never seen a poem written like that before. Lovely concept. Well done.

This is a great poem! Excellent job! It seems really deep! Thank you for sharing this! It truely is a great poem! Keep up the great work!

i really like you style of poetry, it's very unique, i liked how all the words had a nice rythym, it was well written.
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